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I really liked the contrast in this chapter. The chaos of the escape paired with the calm at the fire made both scenes feel stronger.

Elior’s presence stood out to me. He doesn’t pressure or flatter like Seraphiel did. He just feels steady and sincere, and that difference says a lot.

And burning the false Scroll was such a satisfying moment. Not just resisting deception, but getting rid of it completely. You can feel the weight lift right along with Calen. 😊❤️

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